Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Short Film Feedback

Lawrence Akintayo

16.3: M WT D continuity and clear structure, sound and images ok til music drops and foley starts. Pacing issues shot walking into camera is achieved quite well but music break disarms it.

22.3: M WT D colour grading mostly consistent , lots of wandering to build but the flow on body and reaction shots are good, character established, depth of field and focus effective is sometimes have meaning. Technical quality is good – lacking the non linear effects for higher again ends with no resolution and twist not a twist – episodic?

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