- Terminology should be in bold to indicate that you understand the task.
- Provide examples in the form of music videos and screen grab and analyse.
- Explain the purposes and avoid brief descriptions.
- Conclude by comparing indie, major, and self-produced artists.
- Proof read and add detail (where applicable).
Task 2
- Summarize the report at the end to conclude the work.
- Compare the genres in terms of their styles.
- Include screen grabs and an explanation.
- Terminology in bold.
- Shorten the sentences (some are too long)
Task 3
- Follow up each camera technique with a video (arc shot is still missing).
- Revisit the the reason as to why handheld is used in music videos (Refer to wheel).
- Give descriptions more detail and summarize.
- Terminology in bold.
- Short sentences (some are too long).
Task 4
- Some areas of confusion need revisiting.
- Keywords in bold.
- Refer to the wheel in the blog to justify your points.
- Short sentences (some are too long).
Task 5
- In-depth analysis and comparison to how and why it is used.
- Screen grab parts of the video relevant to the question.
- Short sentences (some are too long).
