15 Targets

Task 1

• Terminology should be in bold to indicate that you understand the task. 
• Provide examples in the form of music videos and screen grab and analyse. 
• Explain the purposes and avoid brief descriptions.
• Conclude by comparing indie, major, and self-produced artists.
• Proof read and add detail (where applicable).

Task 2 

• Summarize the report at the end to conclude the work.
• Compare the genres in terms of their styles.
• Include screen grabs and an explanation.
• Terminology in bold.
• Shorten the sentences (some are too long)

Task 3

• Follow up each camera technique with a video (arc shot is still missing).
• Revisit the the reason as to why handheld is used in music videos (Refer to wheel).
• Give descriptions more detail and summarize.
• Terminology in bold.
• Short sentences (some are too long).

Task 4 

• Some areas of confusion need revisiting.
• Keywords in bold.
• Refer to the wheel in the blog to justify your points.
• Short sentences (some are too long).

Task 5

• In-depth analysis and comparison to how and why it is used.
• Screen grab parts of the video relevant to the question.
• Short sentences (some are too long).